Without her, the world’s a dark room.
I can’t see life, I don’t see doom.
She’s the cause and cure for all my troubles,
The light at the end of all my tunnels.
Without her, there’s no life in my stride.
I look for her footsteps, to walk beside.
It seems like a wilderness, while I roam;
She’s not here to hold me, to take me home.
Without her, my nights drown in tears;
My days don’t know frolic from fears.
Bring no love and get me no sympathy,
Gift me my life – just bring her back to me.
I sit motionless in the dark, waiting her arrival;
I can’t see, I can’t breathe, I can’t… She’s my survival.
good one! keep it up!
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Thanks, Amit. 🙂
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you are welcome my fellow poet friend!
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This she is lucky to have a poet like you to describe her so absence so beautifully.. Very minutely drafted..
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Thank you. Actually, it is the poet who is lucky, to have an inspiration like her. Her absence only brings out gloom in my words; her presence fills life in my words, as it does in me.
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Nice..keep blogging with her presence then,that is more better..hehehe
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This is filled with emotions.. deep deep emotions…I believe this is not merely a poet’s creation, but a loving mind’s emotions..
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I’m very humbled by your compliment. Thank you very much. The poem indeed found its source more in pain, than a creative burst.
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I donno about that pain, still wish to be relieved soon, whoever concerned.
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I love it! Not that I love the pain; but how words rhyme while keeping the emotion intact, that’s not easy to write.
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I’m so glad you like it, Iriz. It is a delight to receive such compliments.
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Good post
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Thank you, Gama!
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Expressed so well.
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Thank you, Dhiraj. 🙂
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Bhai reading slowly along with work, but for sure will read most of your work by eod.
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Thank you, Dhiraj! I hope the posts fulfil the time you are taking out. 🙂
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So much beauty stems from pain , no ? I have often found pain brings in perfect harmony between the head , heart and hand and then a piece like this is born.
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I second that completely. Pain also brings along a feeling of numbness, so you don’t realise what you’ve written reflects harmony. It is only later, when you are in lesser pain, that you actually read through the words that you’ve written.
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True !
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The last one! Ooooooooo.. Really good! 🙂
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🙂 Thanks a lot, umm.. Clever Idiot (?)
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Hahaha yeahh… Weird right?
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Haha.. Yeah. I meant to ask you if that is what I should call you. 😛
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This is beautiful 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Visit me too 🙂 I started blogging quite recently. http://www.nonchalantutterings.wordpress.com
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At it… 😛
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Ok. Thank you 🙂
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Amazing!
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Thank you Monica.. 🙂
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You should give me Poetry 101 lessons ☺️☺️☺️
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OH MY! I’m so humbled by that comment. You have far surpassed 101 lessons, trust me. Your poems say you need no learning. 🙂
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Well, lessons in general?? Poetry is not my forte, and I want to learn how to properly write a poem (but I guess there’s no way of writing a poem “properly”). It’s much more complicated than fiction writing, TBH🙄
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Well, I guess everyone has their own forte. I find it easier to write poems compared to fiction. I’m never satisfied with my fiction. You’re right when you say there’s no “proper” way of writing a poem – just each one’s own style. 😉
You don’t need lessons, mate.
You are doing great.
The learning you need for your writing sense,
Will all come from your experience. 🙂
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Wonderful piece there..
The one addressed to must be one lucky lady..☺
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🙂 The poet considers himself lucky enough to have such a muse as inspiration.
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