A gentle breeze brushes past surprised petals,
As an early morn’ finds a sky covered still-white.
No yellowish red rays escape these cotton levels,
And iridescent peacocks scream at the forgotten sight.
Leaves that let go and the fledglings that soar,
Seem wishing to go along with the waltzing air;
While all the senses ask a bliss moment more,
Memories seek refuge in a lost love affair.
Said she, as we parted, “Let memories be a sign
Of the fortuitous times our lives have spent –
And don’t recall a word, thought or deed of mine,
If even a trace might bring out your lament.”
I’ll cherish, thus, this sight and give my heart long lost delight,
For just like this rain on dry earth, it’s what will gift her, her respite.
Just wow!
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Thanks, Kunal
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Eloquently delicate – many congratulations on this work.
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Thank you very much, Hariod.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks.
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Lovely, and sad. Last two lines are great –
“I’ll cherish, thus, this sight and give my heart long lost delight,
For just like this rain on dry earth, it’s what will gift her, her respite.”
– esme nodding upon the Cloud
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Thank you so much. Your comments are something I value a lot. This one made my day. Thanks again.
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its painfully, so beautiful!!
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I am glad to know that the meaning of this poem reached across clearly to you. Thank you for your words of appreciation.
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Lovely stuff. I’m an awkward sonnet writer. You do it beautifully.
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I don’t write that well either, but I found out that writing more helped me improve. See if it helps you. And thank you for the kind words of appreciation.
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Love your poetry. Yours is some of the best I have seen lately.
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Thank you so much! Well, I am indeed humbled by such praise, especially considering the colossal amount of good poetry that can be found here.
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Emotional powerhouse written so eloquitely, flowing effortlessly, just beautiful. ❤
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Those are such encouraging and elating words. Thank you so much.
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You are so welcome!!! 🙂 ❤
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Sonnets are hard! And you NAILED it. Beautiful flow, the rhyme is very natural, the tone fits the story and the form. Well done. Following. 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Joan. I cannot be happier after knowing that my sonnet has been liked so much by someone. It is one of my favourite styles of poetry.
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You are definitely adept at your craft! I loved it! (another one to file away for the classroom – would you mind if I ‘borrowed’?)
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Of course. Although, to be honest, I didn’t understand what you meant by ‘borrow’. Nevertheless, generous compliment, that. Thank you very much.
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I meant, can I use it in the classroom? Full credit to you, of course!
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Of course. Of course. It’d be an honour.
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Appreciated – thanks!
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That’s so beautiful piece lunatic, you expressed it so well 👌🏻🙂
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Thank you, Dhwani
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After a long time Lunatic, how’s you
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This is amazingly beautiful, I’m awestruck!
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Thanks, Aditya.
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beautiful…amazing choice of words…very well articulated
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Thank you very much for your nice words.
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This is so so beautiful, like as if you are flowing with the words. You have scripted it so well. 🙂 I read something so fluent after many days.
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That’s one well-scripted compliment, I must say. Thank you so much, Ruchira.
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You deserve the applause. Welcome though. It is good to hear from you after long 🙂
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Thanks, once again.
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Definitely “WOW” 😀
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That comment made me go “WOW”! Thank you for that expression. Made my day…
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